Do you think this is a great story......i WROTE IT..... based on TRUE story..... do you like it????? # 5?

Because everygirl ofcourse likes to shop dont they? Everyone else was so tired and lazy to go and explore more stuff in London. So we decided to go back home and get rest before another big day touring London. Two more days before we were going to Paris, France. Another long day to go touring London. Toady my grandma had a wacky schedule we had to follow, so we left the house in a rush called a taxi mini- van to pick all 8 of us up. We went to watch a movie after all British kids have the same likings as American kids, there not different. We watched Narnia: The lion the witch and the wadrobe. That movie was all about 4 kids who went inside a wadrobe and discovered a whole new world upon them. The movie was great, I was stuffed with the popcorn and hotdog. We did a little exploring and went back to the taxi to go home, well at least i thought. We were driving in a different road we were not going to my grandmas house, If we were'nt then where were we going?..........